Sunday, October 9, 2011

More Poetry

Ok, this is an old poem I wrote but it's by far my favorite. I started it just by writing out a run-on sentence and then reading it over and over and broke it down where I wanted space and emphasis. It was originally called "The Vengeance of love" but I later changed it to "insert name here" because I thought it was a little more fitting. Hope you enjoy it!

(insert name here)

When you broke up with me,
you were breaking

DEEP

into my skin
with a

hot,
dull,
dirty,
knife.

Cauterizing my heart
f o r e v e r.

Both,

feverishly burning
 and
unmercilessly tormenting it,

while
tenderly and gently healing it…

Prevailing,
it will
continue to
pump blood,
go on,

and make me stronger

for the years that it has with me.

I thank you.
I hate you.
I miss you.
I will love you forever.

That is

-The Vengeance of Love-

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